tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1144041049669146416.post3722836798183966834..comments2012-11-25T21:15:21.919-06:00Comments on Jeanette Kelley's EDM310 Class Blog: BLOG POST #1Jeanettehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00855537246156268917noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1144041049669146416.post-9061955675323208142012-09-05T18:52:42.926-05:002012-09-05T18:52:42.926-05:00Thanks. I will next time. Love the feedback; it he...Thanks. I will next time. Love the feedback; it helps me a lot. Feel free to comment anytime. Jeanettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00855537246156268917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1144041049669146416.post-38088634656358023122012-09-05T18:48:37.036-05:002012-09-05T18:48:37.036-05:00I enjoyed reading your post. You satisfied all th...I enjoyed reading your post. You satisfied all the criteria of the assignment, and it was understandable. There were a few grammar issues, though. Though your meaning was clear, there were some run-on sentences. Maybe you should try using semicolons to separate sentences or introduce lists; that way you won't be using so many ands or buts. Charlottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09380794095641782985noreply@blogger.com